Furry Phillip

This is a story I've been working on for some time. About a fuzzy little guy wants to know what kind of animal he's suppose to be!?

Furry Phillip

 

Page 1: This is Phillip.

 

Page 2: Phillip has a lot of fur. Sometimes it's a lot to take care of!

 

Page 3: With so much fur he doesn't know what he is!

 

Page 4: This makes him very sad.

 

Page 5: To find out he will go on an adventure!

 

Page 6 & 7: (shows Phillip traveling down a road)

 

Page 8: Phillip meets a cat.

 

Page 9: What do cats like to do?

 

Page 10: Cats like to be clean! Phillip is very clean now but... (cat brushing and washing Phillips hair)

 

Page 11: Phillip can't be clean all the time! (shows one of Phillips hairs curling up and the cat looking at him)

 

Page 12 & 13: (Shows Phillip traveling down a road with the cat walking behind him)

 

Page 14: Next Phillip meets a dog.

 

Page 15: What do dogs like to do?

 

Page 16: Dogs like to play! Phillip is having a lot of fun but...

 

Page 17: Phillip can't play all the time! (shows Phillip and that cat taking a nap while

dog is looking on)

 

Page 18 & 19: (Shows Phillip traveling down the road with the dog and cat walking behind him)

 

Page 20: Next Phillip meets a skunk! (cat and dog are shown in the background covering their noses)

 

Page 21: Could Phillip be a skunk?

 

Page 22: Skunks are stinky! (shows the skunk with a green gas floating towards

Phillip's nose, Phillip looks unpleasantly suprised)

 

Page 23: Phillip isn't stinky enough to be a skunk! (shows phillip spraying the skunk with "purr-fume")

 

Page 24 & 25: (shows Phillip traveling down the road with the skunk, dog and cat behind him)

 

Page 26: Next Phillip meets a bird!

 

Page 27: Phillip wonders if he can fly too.

 

Page 28: (bird-eye view of Phillip in the tree. Cat, dog, and skunk looking up at him. Bird looking down to him from the sky)

 

Page 29: (Phillip jumps out of the tree unsure look on his face)

 

Page 30: (Phillip and the bird realize that Phillip can't fly both have frighened looks)

 

Page 31: (Close-up of Phillip hitting his head on the ground!)

 

Page 32: Phillip can't fly! The bird calls for help!

 

Page 33: Everyone helps Phillip get better!

 

Page 34: Phillip has made a lot of new friends.

 

Page 35: (Phillip shown with lightbulb over his head)

 

Page 36: Phillip knows what he can be now!

 

Page 37: He can be a good friend! (shows cat, dog, skunk and bird playing with phillip)

Author's Note

This is a story I've been working on for some time. Very different from my poems, this is a childrens story that I've written and begun to illustrate. Please visit my website at http://cartoonsbyrachel.com/phillip.html to see the first seven pages of illustrations. (I am an illustrator not a webdesigner. So please ignore the bad and uncompleted design I work on updating it as often as possible)

*Important Note: Everything in parentheses is what will be illustrated on that page. Note that not every page has words on it.

Reviews

[Baz]

I visited your site to look at the illustrations and they are truly very good. To be honest, I was expecting to see some amateur-ish stick drawings, but your illustrations are extremely good. The story itself has great potential once all the illustrations are complete. Very well done indeed.

[John]

Heh, this made me chuckle...poor phillip, trying to fly.