October Creeper

Fall’s elemental anonymities twirl in earthly tones

Purpose for celebration soon collapses season

As pessimism creeps upon catastrophe’s hand and forages death’s patience

It will come

Without caveat and yet caveat to some degree...

…it will come and pluck you out of this universe

Underlying dimensions swallow ignorance

While knowledge pollutes a damaged conscious

Reviews

[Ruth]

Blimey!
Gotta say it hon, I relish your words! ♥

[mark slade]

As always, excellent writing.

[Richard Lane]

another poem well done and good my friend.

[Lily Mae]

I could feel myself get smaller in fear of death and what's to come.. I felt paranoid like looking around in wonder and waiting.. so job well done.. you moved me :) xo

[Rob Santana]

Really good I like it. Especially because "CREEPER" is my nickname,haha. I think I told you before I really like your pics of yourself,awesome. I've seen some of your pics on Deviant art. Im a fan of your work.

[Raven Starhawk]

Thank you very much. ^^

[*~*Butterfly Kisses*~*]

Great write for the season. Haunting with emotion and imagery. Nicely done.

[Raven Starhawk]

Thank you for your kind words