Writer Speak

Customarily I devote intervals…

   …inscribing and fashioning domains

Dissimilarities construct individuality as…

    …invariable characteristics deprive creativity

Maturity will stagger upon aversions and move on…

    …while acrimony and resentment denies restriction…

   …for the torment innermost

Reviews

[Cascara (aka Sprint Goe..]

this is so deep and analytical...nice work

[Becky C Strukamp]

Love the structure of this..it drives the reader to pay attention to each word ...as each word so carefully selected joins the others to create yet another masterfully crafted write.
Love it.

[Jo March]

Your vocabulary is so intricate and intense, it makes this poem so dark and haunting... lovely

[KAREN]

Your word choice once again leaves me in awe! Powerful write!

[Sid]

Wow a powerful write, you bring out great truth in this poem and great depth.You used some very intriguing words...great write!!

[Rob Santana]

Damn Raven you have a sick vocab!! I'm not gonna lie, I had to look up the def for acrimony,haha yes my grammer sucks. Bad a*s write Raven.

[Lily Mae]

I love this.. so much truth being shared here. The torment remains for those who choose it as their path... a difficult journey for many..xo Very powerful as always..xo

Again such a deep truth here. Your words, are recognizable for many... and the ones who stand open for it, others just can deny all... but you didn't. Great job!

E.L.

[*~*Butterfly Kisses*~*]

Such a truthful and honest write. I'll never understand humanity and their will to be cruel to others. But I guess the world will never make any sense.

[mark slade]

As usual, a well written poem with a lot of depth.