Falling Red Tears

This poem addresses why I am not reviewing poems and writing as much.

Red Roses bloom around me
A swift dash of steel divides
Falling...or failing?
Like a bottle unopened
It remains trapped inside
Whispers of tomorrow echo the past
Failing...
          I am failing at everything
I don't want to compose
Seedless fruit that will only spoil
As they will never be tasted...
                               never be chosen
Failed

Reviews

[Rob Santana]

It makes me sad to know that you are feeling like this Raven. I'm here if you need to talk, anytime.

[Sahara Mist]

Thank you for your support. ^^* This poem was just a low point for me. And I am on my second account responding to this because ??? O_O I have no real reason why other than being lazy and still feeling down and not like doing read requests at the moment. =_= That will change because I like read requests.