Sorrow Creek

Mock me with you painted lips

Crimson diamonds slither between pearls

Why do you watch me dance?

While the children of the living dead march

And Mother's Day is a massacre

You may find me down by Sorrow Creek

Reviews

[Becky C Strukamp]

The ending, "You may find me down by sorror creek" that is a wonderful ending to a terrific write.

[KAREN]

Emotions and pain drips from this poem. Thought provoking too!

[caroline]

Very good description of sorrow.

[Layla J Omorose]

Wow, loved this. Such a short poem yet it is very powerful. "While the children of the living dead march" favorite line of the poem. Nice job.

[Cascara (aka Sprint Goe..]

oh wow...this poem took me into another world, one filled with painful memories and images. your emotions were penned perfectly.