Turning Red

A Poem by Raven666

my first riddle. please comment.

I am always hungry,

I must always be fed,

The finger I lick,

Well soon turn to red.

--- a fire.

© 2009 Raven666

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Kat24

Hi,
Raven666 this is a good poem. Kat24

Posted 16 Years Ago

Ryosei Takashi Hime

Ohmagod, I love this. X3 I'm gonna use it on my sister. She's a little dense. XD

Posted 16 Years Ago

Karrar

Sweet XD

Posted 16 Years Ago

Tate Morgan

Nice thought But I wanted more

Posted 16 Years Ago

Aurora

Interesting. I can definitely see how that is a fire.
It was almost too easy. (;

Posted 16 Years Ago

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Added on August 11, 2009

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Raven666

Viroqua, WI

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My name is Jena. I have an older brother and five pets named Coco(my rabbit), Shadow and Raven(my two cats), U-Neek and Lena(my two dogs). I love sotfball and soccer. My parents are happily married.. more..