You are not alone

There will be days when it feels like your walking alone

But God will be right there guiding you home

 

You might be standing and shaking in fear

You might doubt that the Lord God is near

 

You are not alone

You're just in the unknown

 

God is near so have no fear

He will walk you through and guide you too!

Author's Note

I asked my sister to take this picture for this poem so I photo edited it :)

Reviews

[~*~Peace Keeper~*~]

I like this and it's true...we may not understand what goes on but we know that He is still there in good times and bad. The last two lines seem to throw off the rhyme and rhythm off a bit, erasing "and guide you too" might be better even though it's true that He will and I don't know if fear and through rhyme xD but it seems to flow better to me lol My suggestion for the picture to better fit the poem would be walking down an actual path and have the person slightly further away from the camera other than that its really good. It just seems the person is at a standstill, unless that's the way you wanted it to look xD

Good Job

[StayAnchored]

Thanks! I really hate editing my poems cause I'm too lazy! Lol
Thanks for the advice and I don't want it to look like I'm ignoring it... :D
I wanted to make it look like I was farther down the path but my sister was impatient(she's 11 lol)

[~*~Peace Keeper~*~]

xD yeahhh I can understand that, I get to lazy too

lol oh then that makes more sence, you did a good job editing it lol

[StayAnchored]

Hehe! Thank ya ;)

[~*~Peace Keeper~*~]

lol You're welcome

[WindsorWolf28]

:) I really like this piece. Nice work!

[StayAnchored]

Thank you for the review! I am glad you liked it :)

[beautiful dreamer]

i love love love this. just what i needed to end my night on. great piece lillie!

[StayAnchored]

Thank you sooo very much! :)

[beautiful dreamer]

you are soooo very welcome!

[Angel Criner]

Very positive (: I hope that you keep spreading positive vibes with your work

[StayAnchored]

Thanks for the review!

[luviva]

nice work and a great message for all the *THOMASES*
those who doubt God's message and word.

[StayAnchored]

Thank ya!! :D

[Akashi]

Quiet impressive, although I wish could read it more than 100 times, madam.

[StayAnchored]

Aww! Thank you very much! :)

[Akashi]

It was my pleasure, miss.

[StayAnchored]

Have a great week! :)

[Akashi]

Oh, you too! May your household have gold and riches, and may you be wealthy with cattle!

[CreativeStroke]

This is so beautiful Lillie! Very true too! God is always with us, even when we don't feel His presence... He is there.

Well done!

[StayAnchored]

Thank you! :)

[marie]

this is so lovely and true!:) great write:) wonderful message, a comfort to all who read this:) lillie you have outdone yourself on this one:) excellent job:)

[StayAnchored]

Thank you, Marie! :)
I really appreciate your reviews!

[marie]

its not problem:) i enjoy your writes:)

[Silhouette]

Really wise, sweet, and reassuring...I love it, great job! =D

[StayAnchored]

Thank ya very much! :)

[Silhouette]

Anytime =)