Waterfall

The Waterfall by Elon Raellin Clarke

Beside me is a cliff

The roaring river stops

and continues into the magnificence

Of a Waterfall

I’m sitting on the banks

Watching the gravity pull the water

The spray becomes a rainbow

And fauna is green and full of life

Standing slowly,I absorb the feel

Of Gaia beneath my feet

I look at the foam so far down

I smile

I dive

Author's Note

Oh Please!! I feel i can get a WHOLE lot better please please?

Reviews

[Bexfinch]

well if you insist u might want to describe how you feel and wat u smell . Use your five senses when writing. But its good really good

[aaaa]

short but nice, a little bit of increased vocabulary can do wonders in order to help you flow and to make the writing more smooth