Surprise

Surprise,my child.

Surprise.

Today is a happy day.

Afterall it is your birthday.

Smile,okay?

It's a very special day.

Blow out your candles,

Make a wish,

Open up your presents.

Give Mommy a kiss.

Don't run away from home,

Don't grow up too fast.

I hope my child,your childhood will last.

Another year has gone goodbye,

a new one says hello.

I am so happy to be your mommy,

and to watch you grow.

Smile,

You are loved you know.

Reviews

[Balkaran Sidhu]

ah..so sweet

[Soul Fire]

:DThank you very much

[Coyote Poetry]

A beautiful poem. Birthday are the good days. Memories to hold on to. I like the thoughts and positive feel of the poem. Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote

[Soul Fire]

thank you very much :D

[C.A. Lucas]

This really cheers me up. When i read it i feel empowered and light. great choice of words and stopping points of lines. it truly works wonders

[Soul Fire]

thank you very much :D

[Allyson Wolfe]

I like this a lot. It's simple, yet you also have an idea of what the mother must be going through. While she is happy to watch her child grow and become successful hopefully, it is also such a pain and heartbreak to watch their child "leave the nest", if you will. Great write overall!

[Soul Fire]

Yes,and that is exactly what I was trying to pro trey.