When Broken meets the Twisted

Broken hearted boy,

Falls for twisted girl.

He takes a leap,

and makes her world swirl.

'Round and 'round again,

Falling in love,all over again.

She's the one for me.

He's the one for her.

They love each other more than you'll ever know.

Reviews

[april13]

this poem kinda reminds me of the relationship i had with my first boyfriend..he was broken,i was twisted.. ( maybe that's why no matter how hard we tried,we had never been able to work it out)..

[Devan]

It's really beautiful it reminds me of me and my fiance. I can definitely relate to this. Also big thumbs up for the Yin picture ^^

[SmileBig :)]

Aww this is sweet :) good job!

[Soul Fire]

thank you!

[SmileBig :)]

Np