M0n$t3R

There is a  secret side of you,

That you do not let anyone see,

You keep it caged.

It's hidden in the deepest caves.

Not even the Braves would venture to.

It's hidden beneath your skin,

No one can see it,

Until you let yourself go.

It's hidden inside,

No one can feel it go in.

It's a piece of you,

It possesses you.

No one can see it,

But you can feel it.

As anger arises no ones safe by your side.

You take your lovers on a wild ride.

No one is safe when your nearby.

You never know when the monster inside you will pry.

How do we know if its all just a lie?

Whoever accompanies you,will die.

Will you ever tell them that your living a lie?

Being a monster is a lonely life.

Reviews

[J. Viands]

Beautiful inside looking out piece it’s like hangin out wit the boogie man under your bed. It doesn’t possess the darker side of things rather question them. It honestly reminded me of grunge music like heavy but mellow at the same time. Well done

[Soul Fire]

Thank you very much

[David the writer]

Beautiful, metaphorical, and deep. Niice

[Soul Fire]

Thanks

[ShadowFaux]

not really a smooth read, i get the concept/theme but I'm not feeling it.

[Soul Fire]

thanks for the review.It's not supposed to be smooth.

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

Very inventive and great metahporical usage here...
splendid :)

[Soul Fire]

Thanks alot

[Zombie Dutcher]

its a very nice poem that is very nicely put together. i very much enjoyed it :)

[Soul Fire]

thank you (:

[Saurian Guardian]

I love this, mainly because I can relate to it so much, being a monster is a lonely life.

[Soul Fire]

Thank you so much for the review (: And it is.