Drained

You are like a monster,

You prey on me.

I am completely drained.

Can't you see me go through this pain?

Why do you try to gain something that isn't there?

Don't you care that theres a tear on my cheek?

I feel so empty,so blunt,so bleak.

I'm drained from life.

Peace is all I seek.

Reviews

[Siliousneo]

minds me of my ex who kept cheating me behind my back is very truthful and to the point great job on the poem i love it

[Soul Fire]

Thank you,and im sorry about that

[Fallen Angel]

Love it! Completely describes my crazy ex-bf.. :P He keeps harrassing me and trying to ruin my life even more than he already has. :P Like always, love your work. :)

[Soul Fire]

Thanks alot! hope all goes well

[Fallen Angel]

Welcome. :) And thanks. I hope so too.

[Ireca]

Great poem-great description of what it feels like to be drained by a "monster".

[Soul Fire]

thanks very much