Dear Unknown

This is a poem about my fathers' secret life,and secret girlfriend.

Dear Unknown lady on my Daddy's mind.

He will hurt you,

You will learn that in time.

You probably know about me,

I know you do.

If you think you can be my mother,

You can shoo.

Dear Lady without a face,

I haven't met you.

But a condom is left on Daddy's bed.

It's as if you were left without a trace in his head.

Dear Dad's Lover,

Trust me,

You'll want another.

Don't you know what he's done?

Dear lady of my Fathers' bed,

If you knew who he really was,

You'd be full of dread.

Dear lady of the sheets,

You homewrecker,

You dirty fox.

You don't know what you've done.

Or who you are.

You don't even know who your lovers' are.

Dear the purse of my fathers' c**k,

I would leave,

Because one day you'll realize the truth,

and be  completely shocked. 

Author's Note

This is a poem about the woman in my Fathers' private life,whom I am not supposed to know about.This is my way of expressing my feelings,and warning her to stay away from my father...Before its too late.

Reviews

[Tabitha t]

somthing about talking of one's father's "c**k" is slightly disturbing, but I think that you would find this discovery disturbing so therefore the poem creates the correct feeling of uncomfortableness. I also wonder how u found out and if u are 100 percent positive and not speculating

[Soul Fire]

I know,But finding results of sex in your Dad's house is also disturbing.as well as my aunt told me he was dating someone...and that they were dating for a while.She was surprised to find out that i didn't know.

[Soul Fire]

It was extremely uncomfortable finding this out

[Tabitha t]

then you have portraide the scenareo perfectly

[Soul Fire]

Thank you very much

[Ella]

A disturbing poem, but an act like this is also disturbing so it is fitting.
One thing though the lines;
"Dear lady of the sheets,
You homewrecker,
You dirty fox."
I do believe that either sheets or fox should be changed so it fits in more with the flow of the poem. All of the other dear whomever sayings the first and third line have rhymed. But I am not sure if you meant that to be that way, I am not a poet myself so I am unsure, but those are my thoughts.

[Soul Fire]

Thank you very much. :D

[Ella]

You're welcome, I hope it helped some.