Little Ballerina

As I dance upon this little pedestal.

With my subjects below my feet.

I am a little ballerina,

Dancing,

Always on my feet.

Music plays as you open your music box,

And before you know it I’m dancing like a spinning top.

And when you close the box, I go away.

You pack me up for another day.

Reviews

[Sami Khalil]

Nice poem... Thanks for sharing...

[Soul Fire]

thank you for the review

[Sami Khalil]

You are quite welcome...

[Felecia]

I have to agree with Dan, this a beautiful poem.

[Soul Fire]

Thank you,and it wasn't supposed to be, i apologize if you think so. i was thinking of how I've always wanted a Music box with a little ballerina dancing inside to the music.

[Ella]

Very beautiful. Well written but it sounds strangely familiar to Felecia's The Little Ballerina...

[Soul Fire]

Thank you, and it wasn't supposed to be, i was thinking of how I've always wanted a Music box with a little ballerina dancing inside to the music.

[Ella]

Alright, I was just thinking so.
Welcome.

[Soul Fire]

I also was thinking of when I took ballet and how much a friend of mine loves it.

[Felecia]

ballet is a wonderful thing..

[Ella]

Ballet is a strange thing xD

[Felecia]

Strange? XD Clearly you've never danced it then, sister mine.

[Ella]

Me? Dance? *Blinks* Is that even physically possible? xD

[Felecia]

Probably not, no offence XD You can couch dance though right?

[Ella]

Professional couch dancer thank you very much XD

[Felecia]

Oh, right, sorry. My mistake XD

[Ella]

lol better be xD

[Soul Fire]

*awkwardly walks away..starts to dance ballet*

[Audrey Howitt]

A beautiful write--right on point--actually I didn't mean the pun--it just happened to come out that way--really enjoyed this!

[Soul Fire]

thank you so much

[Jetta Zippora]

This is so beautiful and whimsical! I love this! Brilliant write, friend. :)

[Soul Fire]

thank you so much

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AWWW! So cute! I LOVE IT! Great poem!

[Soul Fire]

thank you so much

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WELCOME! ^-^

[Soul Fire]

Lovely, and sweet! even as wonderus and intoxicated with magic! loved it! :D Thank you

E.L.

[Soul Fire]

Thank you very much for your review

Loved it! so thank you! :D