I'm not giving up.

Dedicated to the love of my life.

 

You try so hard to hold on,

But your so used to letting go.

But baby, I want you to know,

That I'm in this forever.

I'm never giving up on you.

This is forever,

You and I being together.

I know you've tried so hard before,

I know you want to have so much more.

But believe me baby when I say, I'm not giving up.

I'm here to stay.

 

Reviews

[C.A. Lucas]

:)

[Soul Fire]

Thank you for the smiley :)

[C.A. Lucas]

You're welcome for the smiley :)

[Soul Fire]

:) here's one for you!

[Andrew (MJ) Nugteren]

love it

[Soul Fire]

thanks andrew!

[Andrew (MJ) Nugteren]

no problem

[Fallen Angel]

I like it. :) It's simple and to the point. Same way I write. I find it so much easier to read when it's right to the point and not prolonged for 10 or 20 stanza's. :)

[Soul Fire]

thank you :D

[Fallen Angel]

You're welcome. :) lolz

[J. Viands]

Very roses are red like love should be

[Soul Fire]

thank you :D

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

A very heartfelt rhythmic write....great work :)

[Soul Fire]

thank you

[Steven Cash]

aw reminds me of some songs by The Fray

[Soul Fire]

Thanks for the review. and i like the fray

[Oh Wow, Lovely.]

aww that's cute :) i like it!!

[Soul Fire]

Thank you so much

[Oh Wow, Lovely.]

Yes:)

[MOON]

Good write , heartfelt.

[Soul Fire]

Thank you very much :)