Hidden

Hidden,

I use that word a lot.

But truly that is who I have become.

Hidden inside a skeleton,

Of what I used to be.

Hidden,

Hidden away from sight.

Trying to do what is right.

Hidden,

Hidden away, 

Hidden.

Hiding from what I used to be.

Wanting , Wanting,

Freedom from these chains.

But there I stay,

Hidden.

Hidden away.

Reviews

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

It is easy to stay within our safe shell.. I can relate to your thoughts here, nicely expressed.

[Soul Fire]

Thank you very much.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

My pleasure.

[Forever Hidden]

THIS POEM IS BOUT ME?! THANKS!


XDXDXD Noooo way would anyone write anything for me except myself!
Anyways, like the emotional feel in this. in my opinion There is a rythym to this too :D


GOOD J-O-B!

[Soul Fire]

Thank you. :D

[afra]

beautiful and deep ...well done

[Soul Fire]

Thank you