Inner voices

Listening within

Here is where the soul of the World's eternity is laid to rest.

Where immortality is decided at whim.

Mists of misfortune finger their way across the desolate surface of my skull in search of a new master.

Throughout and within the memorials of antiquity they cry, resonating a soft sorrowful song that only I can hear.

Reviews

[Brittany Zedalis]

This is dark and amazing. ^-^

[Raymond Federle]

Thank you so much! :)

[Baby Ricochet]

Sounds like Hades or purgatory. Purgatory sounds like Hades which is probably where the Catholic church got it. Anyway. Cool Poem. I got a rise out of it.

[Raymond Federle]

thank you BR! :)

[MsJewel]

Dark and haunting, there is a sinister feel to your words that is almost like a distant echo or a whisper...throughout and whithin the memorials of antiquity they cry.....

Very clever. I like the way your mind works Raymond.
:) Julie

[captain]

There is a haunting feel on the voice of this piece. I resonates in every corner of my mind, relating to its inner voices. Pnndering the profound ways of the mind. An inner scream of the soul, searching the waves of fortune, hoping to be blessed with happiness wishes, the voices resides to be patience. Very nice work you have here sir.

[Lyn Anderson]

Another great piece, with a unique style that follows no strict protocol but works beautifully.