Climb

Climb

My thoughts are to expensive to keep

and I spare no expense at emotion.

My nights are to dark to sleep

and they fill my heart like an ocean.

My days belong to others

 and sanity no longer seems,

As child like sighs,

 and nightmarish cries,

on the ladder to my dreams.

Reviews

[Pryde Foltz]

A very expressive and hauntingly beautiful rhyming peace

[Dhaye]

Reaching our dreams is not easy. You have to bear the pain while taking the ladder.
Very relevant, Ray. Thanks for the share.

[Gleb Zavlanov]

A very sad poem which burns with unmatched passion, beauty and emotion. Simply marvelous!

[Raymond Federle]

Thanks! :)

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This sounds so sad. The emotion in this can be felt through every line. I hope you can find peace in your dreams, you deserve some.

[Sami Khalil]

"My thoughts are to(too) expensive to keep

and I spare no expense at emotion.

My nights are too dark to sleep

and I look to my heart like an ocean."

A very good and rhyming poem. I liker the reference to ladders ...Bravo..................