Break

Suffer my conscious heart for it is toxic. I would fight my mindset but without pity.    

I torment myself.

You are unforgiven and would crush the dying shadow of my flame.

Reviews

[Dhaye]

Short but dark and words are really powerful. Nice poem, Ray.I'm impressed with the animated photo. =)

[Jack...]

Now this is dark my friend. But the truth often is. Shadows wreak havoc on the heart when the moon has fled it's post. Very cool.

[s y e]

Wow, this is raw. A really good write Ray.

Your picture didn't work though...

[Raymond Federle]

LOl...yeah I was working on it as you did your review...I think I got it working now!

[s y e]

Sorry! Yeah you got it working now, LOL. I was too quick for ya.... HA! PHWOAR! Freaky dude!

[Raymond Federle]

Damn HTML... I was never any good at writing code. :) But... like any language it just take practice!

[s y e]

OMG, me either! HA! I wish I was, it's so cool. It does but I'm too blonde and dumb... :(