Lie To Me

Tell me you love me.

That you'll never leave me.

Lie to me.

 

Make me want you.

Make me believe that you want me too.

Lie to me.

 

Let me believe that you'll always be there.

That you'll always love me.

Lie to me.

 

Pretend that I'm your only one.

The one who holds your heart.

Lie to me.

 

Wipe my tears away when I cry.

Saying you hate to see me upset.

Lie to me.

 

Promise me forever.

Then rip it all away.

Finally truth.

 

Enjoy my tears.

And prey on my fears.

Finally truth.

 

Hurt me like no one ever has.

Leaving me broken and sad.

Finally truth.

 

How could I get the lies confused with the truth?

How could I be so blind by love for you?

Reviews

[Sir Jaykom]

very captivating style of writings. I enjoyed this read.

[P.S.Chance]

effective writing ... I like the graduation to truth in the end.

[Grey]

This is a powerful write. So much right and wrong all before our eyes. Would you have skipped it all if you had known? Powerful write.

[Ian H Morrison]

well done written with passion and strentgh loved itt

[JRB]

Judgment comes from experience and part of that is bad

[Dreamwind]

I really like this, I have felt this before. Thanks for putting those feelings into words.

[bill]

Chan, I am old enough to be your Grandfather. It amazes me greatly that you have discribed to perfection my first marriage. You were not even born yet when it ended. It was almost as if you were there observing what was taking place!

You are a very sensitive person and have the skill and talent to write about real life situations to perfection.

Bill

[Tasha]

This was very powerful. Love is blind and you described it perfectly.
♥ Ta'Shandra

[Erin Lee]

this is very powerful! i can't tell you how many times I've felt exactly the same way! thanks for the great write, i'm putting it in my library!

[Coyote Poetry]

So beautiful and sad. When the heart need someone. Can be blinded to the truth. Your style in the poetry was excellent. Made the poem easy and a pleasure to read. A excellent poem.
Coyote