Stars

Dream walker 
and a lunar rain 

rice paper boats and a secret temple  
a pagoda of origami silhouettes 
three steps - a woman 
patience in blue  
silk of silence   
the living room 

     plush 

Velvet and wood 

ornate gaze upon the walls - 

     intense. 



footsteps behind 

fingers over my eyes - 

" What do you see ? "   

                                  I feel you  ...  


auburn fur
coat of synesthesia


across the room 
legs gesture 
your fingers scrying my palms  
we rose 
to the simple  
a bed in the middle  
we laid down and looked up  - 


      stars stars and stars 


etched in those surreal nights 

salvation 


you and the way -

               we looked at each other 










copyright 2013 Robin Amaral 

Reviews

[Rikkevi Rue]

lifts one on the gentle updraft of aesthetics to then soar on the racing wind. Here the Occident meets the Orient and entwined exult in the heavenly. Indeed the most skillful brush often uses the fewest strokes, and each masterfully shapes the wide canvas of creativity with your unique and embracive style, rendered all the more enjoyable by the ample spaces provided for other artists interactive imaginings. Merci beaucoup!

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

Fascinating dream to live, while you live to dream.
If this was a scene from your minds eye, then may i suggest that absolute silence be its film-score except for the sighs of your breath..and may it be screened in a natural planetarium...
Thank you

[Neville]

Beautiful imagery indeed and a great read to boot - I find myself agreeing with the views of my reviewing predecessors

All Good Thing,

Neville

[writing mojo]

it's the vision of Dali in a Japanese sky/water, and you space your self between that atmosphere landscaping the shore well, ready to use the wind to score>>> great piece

[jacob erin-cilberto]

i love this!

there are lines in it that remind me much of Cat Stevens' best songs from his early albums.

you mix love into incredible imagery.

[asdarkeyesclose]

rice paper boats and a secret temple

some very beautiful lines here, capturing images and emotions. very few people can write poetry as well as this, letting the poetry express the inner feelings. fantastic.

[Rachel Jane]

really great poem. it created in my mind the idea of freedom...freedom of gestures, freedom of thoughts...freedom generated by feelings...genius

[Lilly Negoi]

a milky way of feelings - the draft was beautiful - but the final version is breathtaking :)

[Robbie~xoxo~]

The blue is magnificent...you really know how to paint an ambiance that is out of this world...This is a heavenly write!

"footsteps behind

fingers over my eyes -

" What do you see ? "

I feel you ..." This is as romantic as it gets!...a sweet moment to savor.~xo~:)