Memento

yeah

Chiral weavings 

            unravel tense  - the release  , 

the devo-notion  of memories 

from illusionary reality 

we see , we feel ,  

it must be real  ... 

a light ! 

           and all I can see is her shadow  ... 

Reviews

[Siddhartha]

The philosophy I hold so dear to my heart - try and regret. Never regret that you did not try. That is the greatest regret of all.

[Neville]

Nice, yeah very nice indeed. N

[Lilly Negoi]

nice :)

Without your light, she wouldn't be her shadow, what an insightful magnificent piece of poetry! Strong, and powerful, like electricity! :)

- Elisa

[Layley Lu]

Oh the madness of magnetics.! I get from your poem that frustration is bearable when emotion balances. That there is strength in suppleness.
This is a poem of strength.

[asdarkeyesclose]

'we see , we feel ,

it must be real ...'


tense/release, illusion/reality, light/shadow lots of opposites here and lots of that beautiful thing called poetry! fantastic.

[roarke]

Sweet release, heavenly senses...the memento chased golden.


...yeah

[Norma M Sutton]

This is nice Robin. I have a few mementos, but only a few :)