Brave
A Poem by Robin
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Perhaps ...
I was once a Prince
heir to a garden
where flowers spoke of seasons
and the trees faced the Sun
maybe ...
I became a King
who held hands with Angels
shone the secrets of the stars
their pages woven within
my circular language
of blended senses
uncounted saint
I have the holy books
in my pocket
next to a stone
I listened to the wise ones
nod , and then look away
and learned from a sage
where truth burned within her eyes
I bare this heart
copyright 2013 Robin Amaral
© 2013 Robin
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I love how you ended this poem "I bare this heart" , that could be taken in so many ways, just that last line in correlation to each stanza, repeatedly stanza, one bare it as in express it, stanza two bare it as in carry it with you, stanza three bare it as in tolerate as a holy vessel would tolerate a wayward child, and stanza four I bare it as a cloak of wisdom, of truth and understanding, I bare this... this responsibility of earning such a huge and immaculate gift of truth inside those eyes...this is just a phenomenal poem Robin :)
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I am a man , I breathe nature , I listen to the stars , I speak dream , music is my life blood , my words pour from my heart . I observe , my hands express .
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