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Soul speak

 at night 

 I gather my stars 

 and listen 

 to the sound of 

 my soul 

 and there

in the rain of dreams 

I feel you  

 © 2013 Robin Christopher Amaral 

Reviews

[asdarkeyesclose]

'and there

in the rain of dreams'


that hint of romance took my breath way. this is extremely light with tremendous word choice, sometimes less is more and it is all about undertanding the balance in your writing, difficult to get it exactly right but here i believe you have done. i enjoyed this a lot. fantastic.

[Neville]

In it's own little way, this is an exquisite gem and a delight to have stumbled across....

All Good Things,

N

[Ruth]

Cascading in its complex simplicity xx

[Amber Betty Marie Child..]

This was the best short hit in the face for me to just click on right now
you dont even know it
count on robin no doubt

[Corset]

This is such a gorgeous write, perhaps it is you then that speaks in my dreams lol. jk, lovely work Robin.

[Cherrie]

there is nothin better than to get lost in thought in star gazing it is the best kind of dreaming -- loved the poem

[A.A.Romanczuk]

it is in the silence that God speaks most loudly, slumbering during the cacophony of the day in the heart's garden...running barefoot through our dreams, when we are silent and wise enough to listen.

[Georgiana S]

Very tender and soulful

[Sweet_pale_cacophony]

Oh! that was beautiful. Reminded me once more what magic can words create if one lets the soul express them :)

[faryn wolff]

Breathtaking. And its brevity is truly impacting.

[Ed Hart]

i'm thinking 'you' is that other, and also the big You in the sky

[Robin]

You connect dots very well Ed