Alma

Soul speak

 at night 

 I gather my stars 

 and listen 

 to the sound of 

 my soul 

 and there

in the rain of dreams 

I feel you  

 © 2013 Robin Christopher Amaral 

Reviews

[asdarkeyesclose]

'and there

in the rain of dreams'


that hint of romance took my breath way. this is extremely light with tremendous word choice, sometimes less is more and it is all about undertanding the balance in your writing, difficult to get it exactly right but here i believe you have done. i enjoyed this a lot. fantastic.

[Veronica Chandler]

Stirring, simply divine and and a joy to read; so much has been said with so few words.
Perfection!