Listening ~

to Devi ~

in the Art 

of listening 

my heart lifted

to the surreal blossom 

of a dream in aqua~marine

this precious sea of subtle light ~here

I silence my thoughts  

to feel 

the purity 

the halo of a precious moment 

to open

and gently surround me in 

the language of the soul ~ meaning 

I felt her whisper 

in the shadow of her eyes 

the essence of ~ this

spilling from her lips 

the poetry within 

the everything with ~ in 

you and I 

copyright 2013 Robin Amaral 

Reviews

[FlamingPhoenix]

This is clever in it's simplicity, yet the imagry draws me in rather deeply. The silencing of thinking to simply embrace the beauty of the moment. Incredibly beautiful and I love your words, "a dream in aqua-marine"--absolutley breathtakingly lovely!

[TeresaMorgan_]

As a reader, this poem feels like a tender exhale— oft, introspective, and deeply intimate. It captures the quiet magic of connection and the unspoken language between souls, unfolding like a gentle tide of emotion.

[shultzfeather]

Whoa, rainy day happening while I mused into checking wc. Had to hello. This one made significant sense to me. Hope all is well, goodbye.

[A.A.Romanczuk]

Focused meditation, the essence unfolded like the petals of the lotus flowers and all was seen and all was known. She and you, you and she-lines blurring.

[Relic]

Flows like a meditation. The silence says more than some words do.

[Siddhartha]

You silently draw in, and then never let go. Hope you are well my friend. So happy to have read this poem today.

[Chris]

Weaves well and leaves the aftertaste of ...wanting more.

Was good to see you back today... I just opened this ne to say Hi.

[asdarkeyesclose]

'I felt her whisper

in the shadow of her eyes'

very beautiful. i can never fault the tone or imagery of your poetry, the flow is very natural, with your writing i always feel as if i am reading something very special. fantastic.

[Ladysue]

When we open ourselves to those precious moments where nothing is know or unknown and just listen and be, there is joy.. Beautifully written as always..

[SkinlessFrank]

your verse is light water flowing over rocks in a clear stream