Magique

to feel

 

 

c'est magique!

 

pas de fumée

pas de miroirs

seulement ce que je ressens

quand je te vois ...

Author's Note

it is magic
no smoke
no mirrors
only how I feel
when I see you

Reviews

[Emily Quinn]

ahh the beauty of the french language, how I love it. This is a great one Robin, very fluent and such a wonderful comparison for "those feelings" like magic. I like the french version best- which makes sense being that it's the poems original language lol
I guess there's only one more thing to say; Comme le titre, vos mots ont une magie de leur propre!

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isn't it though... ;-)


"nectar to drill through steel"

[arbitrary jane]

love without any of the smoke and mirror parlor tricks?
c'est magique indeed.

[fawnavalentine]

I love it, it's so simple!!

[Moonflower]

I love it, perfection~ ;) your work is always lovely, darling

[Lilly Negoi]

aristotle said that love has reasons reason itself cannot understand :). et personne n'a besoin de miroirs pour entendre sa voix interieure :).

Tres belle! Your words are light and honest.

[Coyote Poetry]

A beautiful short poem. To be able to write with skill in another language would open the door to so much. A outstanding short poem.
Coyote

[kuru]

short, sweet and charming!

[AlieahRose]

IT'S SO REAL...
NOTHING EXTRA...
GREAT JOB ON THIS...