Thunder

Thunder

A Chapter by Robin
"

Night rain

"

 

 

rush of onyx rain

 

thunder gallops through the night

 

senses ignited

 

 

 

 



© 2011 Robin


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evokes an indelible image


Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This one moves me.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

transferring immediately to my 'snips'...thanks

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

true, very true .. sense and sensibility in seventeen words ..

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

onyx rain
galloping thunder
senses afire
awesome...

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Storms surely do ignite the senses.
"onyx rain " ... lovely.

Chloe

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

water setting fire :)

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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