I'd bleed to make your roses red

I'd bleed to make your roses red, 

I'd lie to find your truth, 

I'd stay up till you went to bed, 

I'd die young to see your youth. 

I'd silence the world to hear your voice, 

I'd set it all on fire if it did you wrong, 

I'd let fate become your choice, 

I'd do it all gladly while singing a song. 

I'd bleed to make your roses red, 

would you do the same. 

Would you do all things I've said, 

or was this all just a simple game?

Reviews

[Resa]

I really like the flow of this.
Your words draw the reader
Into your passion for this person.
Nice work ! :)

[Lenard L. Banks III]

I love this piece, when I read it what came to mind was Bruno Mars song "grenade". I love the line "I'd die young to see your youth" I've felt like that before to be honest I did die young to see a woman's youth, thank God for being able to be reborn.