Everytime You Look At Me

I would bet my life,

Like I bet my heart,

That you were the one baby.

I've never been so sure of anything before.

You're driving my heart crazy.

I can't hold out,

I can't hold back now,

Like I've done before.

Darling, look at me,

I've fallen like a fool for you.

Darling, can't you see?

I'd do anything you want me to.

I tell myself that I'm in too deep,

Then I fall a little farther...

Everytime you look at me.

Reviews

[Aggie Skeleton]

Don't tell him that. But I liked it anyway.

[Mithridate]

very cute! love it :)

[Fantasia Allmighty]

Nice, don't tell a guy that though. Guys will stretch that out to farrrrr. . .!

[PaperHearts]

This was a really well-written poem! I could relate so much to this piece, and I thought that you did an incredible job in finding the right words to capture your emotions and remain passionate and honest throughout. Your poem had a great flow to it, and the rhythm of your lines almost made it read like lyrics to a song. Nice work,
~PaperHearts

[Nina Kari]

This is an extraordinary piece of work. i love it. please keep writing. :)

[Tina Kline]

Very nice love poem. You capture the feelings of falling in love perfectly here in your well written and tender poem. You did a wonderful job on this.