..Elemental Despair..

the title speaks for itself, uhuh :)

Elemental Despair

The Liquid tears you cry
for the Fire in my grin.
Over and over again.

The grave I'm Digging
in a Whirlwind.
It's taking over and over again.

Fighting and Burning
Loving and Drowning
Searching and Digging
Giving up and Blowing away

The Raindrops fall from the sky
as Flames burn my world to the ground.

Over and over again.

The trees fall to the Earth
as the Wind blows them down.
It's really over and over again.

In a Fire Burning
in this Ocean of Drowning
six feet deep in the Earth
and running out of Air.
Elemental Despair

Author's Note

ehh, I'm sure this isn't the finished product exactly but niice first draft :)

Reviews

[Jenny Nelson]

I like your title here. Earth, wind, fire and water, basic and necessary elements and substances, used in describing despair is interesting. I can definitely feel a struggle that someone wants to win, but not positive they will. Nice write!