Forever and Forever

The angel waits as the world debates.

Forever and Forever

Patient skies to match angel's eyes
to still be there after the angel cries.
The angel "knows"
as the angel grows
and the angel does not die.
Live on sweet wings,
even if ashes stain your feathers
because time burns
as the angel yearns
          forever and  forever.

The time will come
in a patient sum
as she collects all of the dead.
The clock ticks
as the roaches pick
as many times as her tears have shed.
But, stubborn might
in her heavenly light
she leads this life she led.

Her "father" is, all that is
but also all that has not.
The father knows
that everything grows
and nothing gets "forgot".
It lives on sweet wings
even if ashes stain your feathers
because time burns
as the angel yearns
           forever and forever.

Author's Note

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Reviews

[A.]

Beautiful. And it flows so well. Keep up the good work.

[What happened to simple..]

'Live on sweet wings,
even if ashes stain your feathers
because time burns.'

Really beautiful, sort of a burning heaven that overcomes loss.. thanks =)

[Deaths Cold Kiss]

excellent

[SammyJammy]

Quite indepth, and filled with sorrow. This is a very good piece. Great Job.

[Annelise]

I love this line

"It lives on sweet wings
even if ashes stain your feathers
because time burns"

It aches with beauty and sorrow. Very atmospheric peice, visual and fantsy laden. It really is quite beautiful and lovely and so so sad. I love it.

[Katie]

Such sorrow told in a beautiful light. You are very talented! Keep Writting

[Lilly]

honestly - really good - beautiful