Eternity's embrace

A short poem.

My arms are stretched across

The galaxy

Searching...

In vain for your embrace

My voice is but a whimper

I am screaming into infinity

Searching...

For some sign of you

Your presence

Your love

Why did you blast off away

from me?

You are across the universe

and i am out of fuel

My oxygen is empty

You stole my breath, my life, my everything

With your voice

Searching...

For

Eternity's embrace.

Reviews

[~crazy Beautiful~]

i enjoyed this piece very much, short, yet intense with emotions.
vivid imagery that seems to explode off of the page
these lines
"My voice is but a whimper
I am screaming into infinity
Searching...
For some sign of you"
beautiful
nice work
thank you for entering my contest

[After Midnight]

I like the emotion. The words seem to really search for something that was lost or need desperately. It was good. I enjoyed it.

M.

[Marie]

Great work.

Thought I'd share this with you...

[Isericanormal]

I thought it was very nice. I love your choice of words they flowed so perfectly together. The comparisons were great! It spoke to me with every word it was practically inspiring. Wonderful Job!! :~)