I'm not.

This is not for you

I am sitting.

The water is filling.

I am standing.

The flower is wilting.

I am falling.

The clouds are dieing.

I am living.

The rainbow is ending.

Reviews

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This is good. The point you were trying to make is very clear! I like that it was short. I think it is a good poem.

[justjenn_2u]

Everything is dying as you are living. Yep, from the moment we take our first breath, we are dying. Short poem that gets right to the point!