Broken

Ever had a crush on someone?

I'm broken

Cracked, beyond repair.

I wanted something

That wasn't there.

I know I'm too young for this

But I just have to say:

I don't think I'll ever "like" someone again.

Reviews

[steppenwolf]

Yes, I've had lots of crushes; but I like the economy in this poem. Simple and delicate but certainly passionate.

[Isabelle Howard]

Thank you. It was different this time for me though.....

[Shadey Jadey]

Awwww the way you have described your feeling here is very good. You have let it flow, but in a way contained it into something simple, sweet. Very good. Xxx

[Isabelle Howard]

Thank you! I try to do that……don't know if I do do it or not.