5 word poems

memory
imaginary shave--
time
with dad

away
ink stain'd
hands
missing her

longing
a knock--
is
it her?

sex
two lovers,
folded
like origami

Author's Note

no particular order, just 4 5 word poems

Reviews

[miSS LEaf]

it had the skin-gripping feel of a haiku.......
the first part (the dad part), love it..... the last part amazed me; i wrote a similar thought with the basic of origami....
a pleasant reading experience :) ~L

[Ruth]

j.r. - one word - fabulous! lol
This is so cleverly done and moving too!
The memory particularly!
xx

[Sara]

this is a beautiful series of poems... life cut down to its barest essentials, yet still imaginative and poignant...

[Bubo]

Reading this is kind of sums up life well, memories, longing, sex, and what has passed, in a few short sentences you capture lots of imagary making for a rich tapestry.