Far from mutual

I do for you what I do for you

Your love is far from mutual

I trapped myself and erased all care

I'll love you from a distance we can both share

 

Yet I am near and working hard

Alone and unloved in my own backyard

 

By: B. G. R.

Finished: 7/31/08 6:07pm

Reviews

[Angel's Lady]

Wow. So full of emotion in so few words. Wonderful write, melancholy, though, it does leave me feeling.

[wizthom]

once you get use to the soul speaking u will lighting up on the flow,
great intro i just wish u have giving us the rest..peace wizthom

[TamiViolet]

Awe, Reeses, I felt the pain in this. You do out of love, and whatever they do...well, it's up to them.
Yet you feel so alone... I realize that this is just a poem, but...

Lovely...

[universalove]

this is a very sad poem. i can feel that something is missing. love come and goes but true love you have to find. waiting just won`t do it . and at times u have to learn how to trust yourself again.this is special to me cause i hunt for the things i want. it will do for now until then what happens again.

[Charles D. Moorer]

now this is your voice. hopeully this tone and pace can transfer itself to ypur your other work.

[Mintwhiskers]

A very good romance poem u r a great poet

[Mysty Rayn]

I have been here. You captured a moment of loneliness that is hard to explain, but you got it. Great write.