So Long Ago

So Long Ago

 

 

A glimmering diamond

A kiss

A cut of passion

Bestowed upon my soul

Your lips pressed gently

Upon my cheek

Warm and tender

So long ago

A loving embrace

Forever lingers deep in me

The sun dips, slips slowly away

Dripping across a shade of gold

A lovely season in the midst

Glistening in the sunlit haze

With a slight and sultry

Summer wind

My heart is melting

Breathing in the scent of you

In the afterglow within

Reviews

[Droll Prole]

I love this, so dreamy and pretty.

[WindSong]

Thank you for your valued comment!

[Droll Prole]

You're welcome :)

[cynthiabuhainbaello]

Vivid, enchanting, and romantic images graced this lovely flowing poem and created a fascinating mood that refreshes. A wonderful poetic experience!

[WindSong]

Thank you for your valued comment!

[zainul]

This is a proof of divine love that really prevails in the world.
This is an account of how a flower blooms slowly in response to love.
This is a scripture which declares the supremacy of love
Very well written work.
Congratulations!!!

[WindSong]

Thank you for your gracious and valued comment!

[zainul]

You are most welcome.
It is my pleasure that I could add my humble point for your great creation.

[Tony]

To think and ponder of all that was once breathtaking, and as long as those tender and sweet memories cross our mind, the scent forever lingers.
Just beautiful.

[An owl on the moon]

Each line is a treasure of this love.. soft touches.. glimmers of sunlight.. and that scent.. lingering.. I remember once when a girlfriend had worn my coat, the fragrance just connected me to her so quickly, even when she was over a thousand miles away. Your words glow..

[writing mojo]

Such cuddled words that soft display love in verb, pressed to the thought of love in human nature...good stuff

[.]

sensual and blissfully delicate..the words scent of you..is enchanting

[annie minus]

I love the subtle rhyming in this one, you've crafted it very cleverly making it so very readable and enjoyable, beautiful words. Annie

[Starry Eyed]

I enjoyed this, I am begging you to carry on writing!!!!

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

I agree with Sam, O.T. a sigh.........a lovely whispered sigh is exactly how this poem reads. Exquisite writing WindSong. Congrats on your book :) XX