This Time

This Time

 

I want to bathe with you

In the sultry air

Walk hand in hand

In the flow of the sea

I want to be with you

This day

This night

This time

I want to feel our touch

Your breath in mine

I want to hold you close

So close to me

Our hearts shall beat as one

I want to embrace this feeling of love

So deep

So much

This day

This night

You're mine

Beneath a beautiful moonlit sky

We lie down in the sand by the sea

Melting into one another

This night

This time 

Reviews

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

almost the poetic equivilant to fairy magic, delicate, romantic and altogether perfectly flowed, well done.

[anne p. murray- LadeeAn..]

Very sensual and delicately romantic. Very well penned with lyrics that sing and flow. I like the layout

[grayhaven]

A beautifully written romantic poem. So very well said. I enjoyed reading this.

[Dreamer]

this is a sureal piece. I feel as if time has paused for these people. The tone is lovely, so peaceful so delicate. Great write:)

[Wolf's Dark Song]

This is a truly tender and romantic love poem! Your words create such a wonderful image of someone deeply in love with another.

[Daytonight]

What a beautiful and romantic love poem! Well done!

[KAREN]

Beautiful images, Beautiful flow, BEAUTIFUl poem!

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

I want to be your last breath before we suffocate...

such lovely words of complete passion and devotion.

[Chris]

This one has HEAT... and heart.

Very well done.

Chris

[Muse]

Your words are smooth like water. I enjoyed reading this out loud. It just pours off the tongue. Great write!