Summer's Last Rose

Summer's Last Rose

 

A summer breeze on an autumn wind

 

The essence of thee ebbs with the tide

 

Winds brush lightly upon my soul

 

My heart weeps! 

 

The sea winds still blow

 

A flame burns on the edge of time

 

By a memoir left for thee

 

Love!

 

An elusive butterfly

 

Etched by mystique and intrigue

 

Our paths crossed by destiny

 

A summer breeze on an autumn wind

 

With summer's last rose by the sea

Reviews

[Debbie_Philly]

Wind this is gorgeous !! So much imagery.... Really loved this !! :)

[WindSong]

Thank you for your lovely comment!

[An owl on the moon]

There is an enchanted depth in your words... the images that suggest so much more in this movement of seasons... Destiny can bring about the brightest visions on the winds of time.

[grayhaven]

What a lovely lovely poem WindSong. Such emotion and feeling coming from this. It flows so smoothly. Well done. = )

[Hotwater]

Stunning! these words just melt in the mind, so very well done, I just have to give this 100%.
*bird*

[LadyNaida]

This is breathe taking!

[Ruth]

Truly stunning poem!
The balance here and imagery is astounding love! I smiled as I read this...amazing!
xx

[Pablo]

Love the images, especially "summer's last rose." Bravo.

[Audrey Howitt]

Beautiful, beautiful writing!! I love the sense and feel of this poem. It is both sad and loving---

[Tony]

Emotionally beautiful, your word choice is perfect and makes this piece flow upon a calm sea of sadness.

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

A truly captivating piece of writing.