Emotion Secrets

Emotions that i know if i say anything it will make things worse for everyone an thy self each part is about something or someone else but words i lately just lock away

Ashamed i am, living this life of pain

Loss of love, when love knows no name

Confused i am, strolling this life swinging mood to mood

I am Woman, yet can hardly elude

Question i do, every word, move i make

Loss of love, when love knows no fake

Taken love they did, this bud of my heart frozen in time

I am Woman, this bud will melt as i make the climb

Frightened i am, unspoken words sealed shut

Loss of love, when love knows no lust 

Disgusted she maybe, if ever hear my truth

I am Woman, She is a crush of my youth

Author's Note

What are your thoughts i wrote this today

Reviews

[I Am Svetlana]

It's amazing how powerful unspoken words can be. Emotions are scary, but worth revealing.

[Reina Love]

Yep i agree

[Gio S.P.]

At first this poem gave me the notion that it was pertaining to a loss of a newborn. "Loss of love, when love knows no name, confused I am, strolling this life swinging mood-to-mood." How could something like that not click, you know? And then I continued to read on and saw, "taken love they did, this bud of my heart frozen in time" and I was committed to that notion. I assumed that the bud was the baby and its passing was, to you, like time frozen. And then the first line of the last stanza had it making more sense, how the loss of a child can leave you speechless, literally, never being able to tell anyone how much pain is associated with it. And then the last 3 lines took that all away. I LOVE THIS POEM! I was led to believe one idea and - BAM, I'm slapped with a polar opposite. Well done! 100/100 from me :)

[Reina Love]

Haha funny thing is though the first part is actually not about a kid the second part is though but its not totally what you would think right on the spot the last part well it kinda is obvious really.

[Dawn]

Poetry is best when it's from the heart. Thanks for sharing your heartfelt work. :)

[Reina Love]

:) thanks Dawn

[Relic]

To me, all the rhymes sound forced. I'd like to see you write in free verse and not worry about rhyming.

[Reina Love]

When i do that it looks as if a kid wrote it lols i have memory issues and words that i should know i forget so i look at words online alot of the time when writing a poem this is actually the only one of the three i did so on here

[Relic]

Hmm? I suppose that could be a problem huh? :) Well, I wish you luck with the memory problems but its good to see you writing and working through it.

[Reina Love]

Ya...BTW i just edited one of my other two poems i felt as if it weren't done so i added to it

[Relic]

A professor of mine once told me, writing is never finished, its abandoned. Revising and adding is fine. I'm going to do that myself.

[Reina Love]

Ya well i never went to school for writing poetry haha i actually started with writing lyrics

[Relic]

I think I did too at one point. I stumbled onto another site (Booksie) and started writing poems there. Then I joined here.

[Reina Love]

Funny thing is i felt like one of those people who grew up with a bit of a talent that wasn't family related until one day my parents told me my Grandma wrote poems. When the whole time i thought she only wrote stories which my Brother took up on. I felt the whole time i wasn't really apart of the family but then again i was a teen at the time and alot of teens feel like that.

[Relic]

Yes, I'm sure they do. Its funny how things tend to happen through a bloodline without our realizing it.

[Reina Love]

Ya totally haha :)

[Maumil Mehraj]

"Frightened i am, unspoken words sealed shut
Loss of love, when love knows no lust "
You expressed your views very boldly and were able to convey the message clearly.
Good work!
Maumil

[Reina Love]

Thank you i got pretty darn inspired that day an i believe this is the best I've written yet I'm trying to do better each time

[Maumil Mehraj]

Keep on writing, you are good at it :)

[Reina Love]

Awwwwwwww thank you that means so much to me you have no idea :)

[Maumil Mehraj]

aww!!no problem honey