Soft Feet

A quick descriptive poem about footsteps.

Soft Feet

Like rain that falls with melody

And kisses with silver light

Like a warm spring breeze

Zesty with smile and bright

Treading softly forever

On the worn path to 

No where

Everywhere

Here

Author's Note

I made it up on the spot! What do you think?

Reviews

[Jason Galliger]

this poem like the title sits softly in my mind. I like the use of zesty, and the warm imagery. Keep it up!

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{what an soft exquisite write--great poetry}

...i love it...

james:-)

[Onyx_Rayne]

This is a beautiful write... great form, lovely content and vivid imagery.

Excellent work- I like it a lot... and thank you for your review of my piece :)