Notice.

Notice.

A Poem by Renee

The humming of the computer.
The child yearning for attention.
What happened ten minutes ago.
Mazes sculpted into hands, making us unique.
The subtle wind.
People who feel invisible.
Often times we're too caught up in life to notice such things.

© 2010 Renee


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short and to the point. So true, so true.
Nice work, well done.

Posted 15 Years Ago


Very true. Life blinds our eyes sometimes, making us miss out on little delights. It is a double edged sword I guess. It makes us ignore "unimportant things" to concentrate on the work at hand. But we have no power ourselves to determine what those unimportant things are.

There's so much written with so few words here. Very well done!

Posted 15 Years Ago



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I find guys with intellect attractive. Next year I'll be going to university for Computer Science. I work at a daycare and I absolutely love it. I'm itty bitty. That's about it. more..