A new day

about new beginnings

A little unsaid, undone

Not sure where to go

I step into a new day, a new time

I set sail into the sea

 

With new hopes,

Brimming to the fore

I inhale the blue

The morning sun

 

I feel the breeze

And say to myself

There is no better day

To start over

 

I may not know where to go

but I have my will

and my heart.

They will take me to a land anew.

 

 

Reviews

[DeViouS]

Refreshing! A fresh start. A new focus. I can picture the Wind in the sails and thus the decision to set out
`I feel the breeze
And say to myself
There is no better day
To start over
(although you may not be speaking of a sailing boat). The joy of just going is wonderful!

[deeps]

This is amazing! I really enjoyed the flow of this write.
Very well done I love the last stanza the best.