Illusion of me

The need to express myself

I ache to splash my blood on the page,
to pour myself out, wonder, love and rage.
I am neatly put together, attempting perfect you see.
Few know the complex paradoxes of me.

Reviews

[Cassie Fraga]

OOOOHHHH MY!!!! when pieces are written from within they always speak so loud!! and this one is screamin at me!!!! AWESOME WRITE REV.!!! **tips my lyrical wand to you**

[Priscilla Sayers]

I want more!
"Feed me Seymour!"
He he he!

[Priscilla Sayers]

Few may know, though many will feel.
The paradox of you
perfect
sweet
still.
Fabulous work! Beautiful in it's simplicity.
Complex is the idea that you have created for so many as their perspective may spin in thought provoking splendor.

[TheWriter]

" I ache to splash my blood on the page," I love this line! You def described what every does when they write; out blood, sweat, and tears into out words though out pens, pencils, and keyboards. Well done!!!

[Brandon S. Whitten]

A road once traveled and still feel pain after love stripped away what was no longer to remain my prison. Beautiful piece. Thank you for sharing. Love M.C. Escher.

[Pi Cee]

Perfect is so harsh, some would wonder it be perfect at all.

Purrfect rhyme. A wonderful flow.

[Robbie~xoxo~]

Inked expression of oneself, is liberating... to pour out what is in the heart and soul, is a gratifying release for the artist...

If only perfection is displayed, then it becomes a magical illusion in the eye of the beholder...

Thought provoking...Great write!

[Nautili]

Nice-concise but packs a punch, nontheless. I adore the picture!

[Blue Ivory]

Excellent way to express the conflicts within the mind. Short, simple and to the point. I love the words you've used. Very few people have the ability to pick the right words when the poem is short. You had me in the first line =) I really love your style!