Beautiful Slide

A new style.

Savor Intensity of
destructive inception    

Spinning in confusion from
paradoxes exception

Writing metaphors
to open doors

And bleed infinite
desire into
consuming fire

Constructive design
missing lines

Bending my Creed
in lustful need

To know

To know. 

Know

No

Reviews

[Nautili]

I take this as a play on the interplay of faith with the temptations that abound in this life....savior, consuming fire, constructive design.... all speak of the realm of the spiritual."Bending my Creed in lustful need".....compromises sometimes arise from desperation....all a learning process, on the road to wholeness.The lines will materialize in time. The ending is egnimatic....as though you are saying that in knowing what is right you must say no to your inner desires.....

[Earthy Mumma Soul]

this so speaks to me right now , I really connect with most of this piece , you have a great way with words :) really effective in drawing me right in ...

[Nona]

this poem reminds me photography of Man Ray! strong fascination with dis-"tructive design" of dreams!

[❀ Gabriela ..]

Interesting, beautiful poem!! Excellent!

[Divinity Sleeps in This]

I like the myth of questions and trail of subjectivity in your lines.

[romel bennington]

good one.... :)

[Cassie Fraga]

WOW!!! very interesting... and clever with the image!!
BRAVO!! BRAVO!!
" To know... To know... No..." love that right there!! can relate to this piece thank you for sharing!!

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

The intese referal to faith, religion and outermost thoughts, leaves the reader fulfilled and rendered, to the point of exaustion, well done, good read.

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Is not the communion of faith to live in the temptations of life? For many yes..and you brought to live in concise verse this very feeling..religion and it's constraints bear well for this but personally I have a very different ideas..but thats another poem..LOL

[Revery]

@Nautili, You nailed it. 100%