Never

This is an older poem I'm re-posting.

We were pure and we will never know

We were true and we chose to go



No matter if it was to be more

Time freezes here

Closing the door

But the moment is strong enough

Cutting straight to the core



Sometimes the power of impression

Only needs a moment

To change someone,

To move someone,

Quickening, lovely, potent



Memory will always see

The moment, you and me.

The force of destiny



Etched in the heart

Etched into time

Right from the start.

Reviews

[Linda Marie Van Tassell]

A flash of lightning can last forever in the memory of one who sees it. You have captured a moment forever in the grace of your words, leaving its impression on the world.

[Revery]

I love the way you describe this poem, thank you for reading. :)

[Sami Khalil]

All you need with this piece is music to serenade anyone that is in love ...
A very lovely and talented work you bestow on us dear poet...

[Revery]

Thank you sir. I haven't added the dimension of sound yet. But it would be a good addition.

[Sami Khalil]

It is good either way.You are welcome...

[Annie Wilthew]

It is as though you took time and imprinted it in the mud and it is frozen there! I love this poem.

[Revery]

Thank you Annie.

[Priscilla Sayers]

A beautiful moment. A poem so full of how moments should be savored.... Wonderful!

[Revery]

How did I miss this. Thank you Priscilla.

[Priscilla Sayers]

Much Love Homie:)

[Revery]

:P

[Seashell]

the moment was meant to be... as Fate would have said to both concerned....these times are precious and affects our very being
Thank you for sharing
B x

[Revery]

Thank you so much. This is an old one.

[Seashell]

never mind...so am I...tee hee x

[Revery]

No

[Seashell]

:)

[Robbie~xoxo~]

This is breathtaking... A choice made, within "the force of destiny". A truly potent write!

"Etched in the heart

Etched into time

Right from the start"~ A beautiful end to a Heartfelt piece.~xo~ :)

[Pax]

Beautiful and meaningful.
the power of impression is really good.

[SashaBella]

The power of memory and time gone by...my truest photographs for me. This poem is a catalyst for bringing memories I have up to the surface, taking me back in time "time freezes here closing the door." As long as I have a memory, I have a photograph of my past. I love this poem. So lovely.

[Revery]

Your reviews are so sweet. I love that you appreciate this so much. Strike some memories for you? :)

[SashaBella]

Yes, very much so.

[R J Askew]

Esp like, 'time freezes here/closing the door' but moreso this bit which is so positive, 'Sometimes the power of impression/only needs a moment'.

[TawnyBlueStar]

nice poem :) love the last stanza :D