Rhythm

The importance of rhythm and consistency.

In              
             rhythmic           
                  pattern         
 

                  The
                           moon   
                       and
                          tides
                        wax
                     and
                   wane


              But         
         not         
     you          
   my             
dear                

Reviews

[Michael G.]

In whatever form you put this in, this senyru of consistent love is lovely.

[Revery]

Thank you.

[Harley (arbiter)]

Simple yet kinda complex. I like it. Don't think you needed the picture though. Still good job

[Candylove.]

this is stunning. everything from the structure and form to the way the poem itself just flows so beautifully word to word, it says so much in it's simplicity. I have to agree with the reviewer below me, absolutely charming.

[MoriartyMesa]

The image is not needed, the words flow an pattern the thoughts of the reader to look into the night sky and wish to mother Moon.


Very charming.....

[MOON]

Beautiful , you said it so well as in poetry so in life.

[Nona]

you are sucha great Master of form! I wish I was that much inventive! very impressive!

[Eve]

ohh, i love how you structured this write... I sometimes think I would love for someone to be steady like that, unchanging, steady, but that is not really realistic, the best I can hope for to to grow along side very much like you have made structure here to bend your words to this poem. very clever :)

[emmajoy]

A poem complete .. words waxing and waning down a page, a perfect thought in fine style.

[Brianna Brie]

Great concrete poem! Wish I thought of it.