Struggling man

People walk easy,

All carrying one bag or none,

One is carrying three,

He walks differently.

People just passed him,

No hand to offer,

No encourage to give,

The man struggles.

Reviews

[Kathy Van Kurin]

'Struggling man'
Pale Moon,
You are showing the difference within humanity between those who would give of themselves and not. By taking a period's experience walking on the street a story is told. Do people care for more than there own comfort? If a need cries out within the ability to help is it ignored or is a hand of help and kindness offered.
Bless you and your writing.
Kathy

[Pale Moon]

Thanks for the review. I really appreciate it :)