To Guimaras

We left home,

Two of us,

A journey,

From land to sea,

With excitement in our faces.

 

We rode on crowded jeeps,

Ignoring the heat,

Smoke and noise unmatched,

"To BuenaVista!" We still said.

 

We arrived,

We waited,

We laughed,

With tickets on our grasp,

We rode on a boat for guimaras,

Feeling up the sea wind.

 

We reached the island,

There she waited,

There she saw us,

I took out the gift,

A cake,

We said "Happy Birthday"

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

A wonderful ending to the story. A birthday party. I liked the journey leading to a happy ending. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote